Performance, Feedback, REVISION.
Well I think it's time to bust a rhyme, let the music in my soul shoot for the goal.
Pssh I'm totally kidding, like totally. ANyways revision can come in many forms, but it's basically the act of refining something that has been previously attempted. Can't fix something that hasn't been broken, and to break something means it had to be made. You can revise an essay, you're yu-gi-oh techniques, or even you're tennis posture!
You can revise something that is yours, behind doors, in the open, when its broken, in the car, or at the bar. In you're house, with a mouse, on a train while in pain! I'm a poet and I didn't even know it?
I'm sure there's people out there wishing they could revise my rhymes, and all I say is ANYTIME. I live to learn, and yearn to grow, and to live and grow I must first know what it good and what is bad, what is happy and what is sad. TO revise life's work is an endless journey, but I'd ask you all not to worry, life is good, but also short, so live it up, before you're dirt.
I'm really enjoying the enthusiasm in this post (even if I do get a little distracted on the thousands of priests plastered on the back of the page due to having an enormous screen). Furthermore, I'm find it amusing that you used pop-culture references to explain yourself and ideas, such as yu-gi-oh.
ReplyDeleteStill, the whole rhyming thing? I did it already, so perhaps you can post something more innovative and original, and stop trying to be a marvel. :)
Woah, woah, woah. I can't believe you said that!
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