What I learned!

I found the writing conference to be very helpful because it showed me a few key flaws in my writing. I put too much time into how the paper was going to be set up, while everyone else just dived right into the paper itself. I realize that I need to put the identity at the begining of my paper because that is what is most important. I will try to trim down on the paragraphs about structure and put more emphasis on writing techniques that help the blogger portray his identity. Hopefully it turns out okay!

THANK YOU for all the constructive criticism!